Evaluation task 3. What have you learned from your audience feedback?

For my feedback I used paint and photoshop to make images and to make them look nice.

Class and teacher feedback for initial treatment:

I was pleased to see that people liked my treatment and when I looked at the points which they made I found that my group had to change parts of our treatment. The changes which we made to our treatment were first of all say how we would make it look like a big crowd in the party scene. So what we said was that we would keep the camera so that it would make everyone in the shot a tight squeeze which made everything look more realistic. For the actual video we had Yas in a few different costumes for the outfit change. We did this because in the feeback people thought that if we had costume it would look nicer.

Rough cut, class and teacher feedback:

For our rough cut feedback I liked that people liked our see through piano scene. They didn't seem to like how long each shot went on for and they said the lip syncing was a bit out of time. When we looked at this feedback we wrote down each thing people didn't like and looked at the video again and then changed each part if we agreed with what our class and teacher said.

(Digipak rough) feedback:

Here are some pictures of the early stages of my digipak:

Final version feedback; class and teacher:

Above is the feedback for my final video which i was very pleased with.