Positives:
- I like how several pieces of footage are overlapped. Also how the guitarist goes from tree to tree, and when the singer disappears at the beginning of the footage.
- I love the camera being in the same place, and the fades, locations and the ideas work really well.
- Cute; good opening; costume; guitarist; mise-en-scene; shots; effects; graffiti room.
- Rob shots are good. Max shots are amazing!
- Costume change, lip synch, shot pans up to Rob, good editing.
- Costume and party Scene performance.
- The first 30 seconds to a minute has loads of cuts and this makes it more interesting.
- So many costume changes, edit of rob beginning and the piano fade looks like a music video already.
- Happy feel.
- Nice variety of shots, good use of rob, good effects on edit, Jman's shot.
- Great shots.
- Good use of costume and location, Jahmal shot FTW, teleporting!
- Changing spots & costume in same location, very nice! Effect with two videos looks cool, like the behind stage location.
- I love the faded shot where Yas looks like she's flying.
- Costume and party Scene performance.
- The first 30 seconds to a minute has loads of cuts and this makes it more interesting.
- So many costume changes, edit of rob beginning and the piano fade looks like a music video already.
- Happy feel.
- Nice variety of shots, good use of rob, good effects on edit, Jman's shot.
- Great shots.
- Good use of costume and location, Jahmal shot FTW, teleporting!
- Changing spots & costume in same location, very nice! Effect with two videos looks cool, like the behind stage location.
- I love the faded shot where Yas looks like she's flying.
How to improve:
Some of the footage was not lip-synched right, maybe go back and improve this.
- Unless there's anything a thing you haven't put in yet that'll make it amazing, I wouldn't change much at all.
- Lip synch seems out in bits, feet go on too long cut a bit obvious towards end.
- Lip synch and guitar synch a bit off.
- Add Yaz singing outside; TAKE MAX OUT OF IT (hannah joking)
- I think the shot where you sort of see through the piano is held a little too long.
- The synch is slightly off at the beginning.
- Transparent stuff is best when its just in the piano not the whole frame, Jahmal at back.
- Some shots are to overloaded
- Lip synch out in faded shot.
- HD?....No
Some lipsyncing shots slightly off.
Lipsync sometimes not right.
Some of the footage was not lip-synched right, maybe go back and improve this.
- Unless there's anything a thing you haven't put in yet that'll make it amazing, I wouldn't change much at all.
- Lip synch seems out in bits, feet go on too long cut a bit obvious towards end.
- Lip synch and guitar synch a bit off.
- Add Yaz singing outside; TAKE MAX OUT OF IT (hannah joking)
- I think the shot where you sort of see through the piano is held a little too long.
- The synch is slightly off at the beginning.
- Transparent stuff is best when its just in the piano not the whole frame, Jahmal at back.
- Some shots are to overloaded
- Lip synch out in faded shot.
- HD?....No
Some lipsyncing shots slightly off.
Lipsync sometimes not right.
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